I like it :)

Bede--I like your poetry, awesome job! I am not good at poetry myself--though wish I had some talent in the area...How's everything going for you?!

don't talk yourself down !

It was really good. :)

@KnightInCROATIANarmor - Thanks Boris

@Endless21Echos - Thanks Erin :)
Yeah it's tricky writing poems...I'd love to be able to write one of those really beautiful ones, but I need more practice I think.

@under_the_carpet - Aww thanks Anne :D

@Cestovatelka - Thank you!
I bought you a postcard today...finally :) i'll get it sent as soon as i get myself organized.

@NoForevers - Thank you, not my photo but I thought it was just right for the poem :)

Ooo a postcard? :D Thank you so much! :)

Calm down. I'm here, and believe it or not; I need you too, baby.

In all seriousness, that was beautiful. Delete the end (you mustn't dog yourself)  After all, there are xangans that will do that for you.

I've been neglecting xanga because of house guests. I hope to catch up on more of your posts. Sadly, we have more guests arriving tomorrow....oh, joy!

Just out of curiousity, who is your poem about?

@Cestovatelka - :D yeah thought I should finally add to your collection.

@Kellsbella - Yay I wondered where you'd gotten to :D
Thank you for the compliments and offer of dogging...though that second bit is slightly not so nice :P hehe
I've been pretty random on my Xanga time too it has to be said. I hope your guests are gracious, pleasant and leave quickly ;)

As for the subject of my poem...well it's not so much about anyone more like a feeling.
A combination of things I want to say and the frustration of not being able to say them, also those moments of inspiration where everything works so well together and you can create something beautiful...for me anyway are only ever a passing thing that I have to wait for rather than generate.

LOOK AT THIS CASANOVA.

@CaKaLusa - Huh?...where? *looks behind himself*

@SaintBlue1131 - Mmmm... I loved your explanation of your poem....delicious.

I'm going to pretend I'm sick to get out of boating with our house guests. Would you believe they brought an extra child and a cat they picked up at a gas station? I really don't mind the child or the cat, but a heads up before 11:30 p.m. would've been nice.....

Now, I'm off to stalk calusa.

@Kellsbella - Now thats is a full service gas station!
Fuel, Gum, Flowers, Felines...and kids :P lol

Now just wait a minuet are you telling me that you're stalking other men on the side!!!??

Hehe good luck with the boat avoiding ;)

I love this

Is this the plea to a muse that is going to lead to an epic tale of heroism? If it is, you're doing it right.

@xdeelynnx - Hehe aww thanks :)

@angelwingfive - That would be an awesome muse to have :D
Too many computer games have made me look at the world as if there should be more hero's and quests ;)

That was truly beautifully written, Bede! I think you need to give yourself more credit. :) I love reading poetry. It's simply a peek into a person's soul..you get to sense what's in their heart. 

@Babieboo_Annie - Aww thank you Ann :D
Thats really kind of you to say.

Speechless. you're a natural.

@Veerise - Thank you so much :D