An inmortal, I love her character almost as much as I love the real girl :D Grat job with this one Bede!

How she got that power would be a bit problematic. Could she get the power passed on by her ancestors? Then again the powers sound a bit deistic and maybe beyond the laws of physics.

So maybe there might have been a time traveler that gave her the powers or ability to know the future?

Sounds interesting.  If you don't mind me asking, when she manipulates time, does it affect her?  For example.  If she sped up her own time by a factor of ten, it would seem to the world that she's moving ten times faster.  But would she be aging ten times faster as well?

With things like bullets, and exceptionally long falls, she would probably be looking at manipulating time by a factor of hundreds.  And there is the possibility of speeding up her own time to acquire a full night's worth of sleep in a second or three on a critical mission.  Even if this averages into aging two years for every single year that passes in "regular time", in about ten years, this will raise a lot of questions.

On the flip side, she might slow down her own time to compensate for the discrepancy, but that would mean the world around her would speed up, and she would be effectively out of action for a lengthy duration of time.

I'm... probably thinking too much into this, aren't I? :D

YAY!! I loves this character! She's so so so cool! But, I loves the real girl more! She's one of my BabyGirls!
GREAT job, LittleCakes!
HUGS!

quite  interesting.

Yet another Zero to the collection. The collection of NOBODIES!

Perhaps some of the points  that  @PPhilip - brings up can be fleshed out as her story develops, maybe some of @Lakakalo -  points as well.. .although he may be looking too far into this...

but i'm sure it'll be interesting to see what becomes of this

Because I don't care how much @AdamsWomanFell - loves this character Mr. Saint Blue... If she gets in the way of B.A.D... you know... well BAD things will happen to Ms X ninja

@xXxlovelylollipop - Is right... you did a great job creating this character, Mr. Blue i'll give you that much.

But once we're done with her... She's going to which she can go back in time, to before she ever existed in the 1st generation

Umm I would go into more detail, but your Wackstar is providing me and my lovely evil girl ... well Wackstar is being a bit of a... what would you say? Nuisance.

So i'm off to prevent her from holding both female titles! Because no matter what, the Prince will be forever doomed! His little staff thingy will never be his again!

Ahh i've rambled on too much.  Now if you excuse me, i have plans to make, and possibly wannabe Minumums wrestlers to throw to the wolves.. if you know who I mean

THE LEADER OF THE B.A.D. The TRULY  Immortal VIPER PHOENIX HAS SPOKEN!!!!!

Truly good story-line. 

Nice

This is amazing :) My powers sound interesting, yet somewhat complicated :P I'm proud to be part of the Xanga Legion :D

@Twiztidsilverskull - Well obviously the leader of B.A.D is unaware of rule 19.

@xXxlovelylollipop - :D yea shes super even without powers.

@AdamsWomanFell - Thank You :D
I think she turned out very cool too :) glad you know her she's another heart person.

@nov_way - Thanks! :)

@bmojsilo - :)

@xdeelynnx - And they are lucky to have you! :)
I'll do what I can to clarify...but basically you have built in bullet time and super speed ;)

@PPhilip - Well the concept is that the original warrior managed to imprint her memories into her energetic make up. So like the idea of a Buddah although her body can die her mind and ability continues.
Add to this the none-sequential part and she is in effect able to choose when she will reincarnate from all the people of the world (the details of that i'll leave to imagination) but when her energy finds a host she then waits until the right age and begins her training once again, eventually her newest body will die and so on.

The only thing that was different in this case was that the energy was combined so rather than passing through it was amplified and solidified into the hero and super powers.

@Lakakalo - Yes you are over thinking this...but THANKYOU :D to both you and pphilip because I love going into these ideas in detail lol

Okay so I now remember why i had untill now avoided time powers, because they are a nightmare of paradox and plot holes, but lets give it a go...
The ability she has is not time travel. Rather she is able to control the time speed of her own physical form and things she can hold in her hands/carry.

This does not effect her position in the global time flow, so age is not effected. Much like when time can seem to move differently for different people or how depending on gravity it can change and stretch.
So she is able to perfom abilities that look and act like 'Bullet time' or the powers of the Prince of Persia world (minus the reverse of time power) it's a very local time alteration.

@Twiztidsilverskull - Haha sounds like the little birdy...oh sorry I mean the Viper Pheonix :P is having some troubles with TrackStar, he'd better watch out because this new addition is not to be messed with.
Nice to see you're still out there lurking in the shadows waiting to pounce on new arrivals ;)

that's a cool story

@Lakakalo - Rule 19? I have you know sir that I Make the rules! It's the Viper Phoenixes's world, those Xanga Legion of weaklings just live in it

@SaintBlue1131 - Why of course I'm waiting around to pounce on new arrivals!  Trackstar is lucky that guys can't fight women in that game, or I would have spinal personally take care of her once and for all!

but for now...

Actually, i'm a bit overdue for an update post concerning the fates of trackstar and wannabe wrestler dude, aren't i?  hopefully there will be something left of them to update you on...

Don't worry though, we'll take care care of ms princess of Persia too... in due time...

@Twiztidsilverskull - An awful lot of words just to say "No." :P

@SaintBlue1131 - O...K... so it's a bit more like the Flash, who taps into a Speed Force, which doesn't affect the temporal state of the Flash as such, but enables them to manipulate the speed of themselves & anything they are in physical contact with.

My previous line of thinking was along the lines of the Time Monks of Discworld, who didn't so much manipulate time as reallocate it, sapping time away from one source and applying it to another.

And ... once again, I'm thinking a bit too much into this, but what's to stop her from sneaking up on an enemy and causing them to age an additional 42 years?

Good job, Bede!  Thumbs up!