May 13, 2011
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Poetry Wars
It’s quills at 20 paces!
Recently LKJ Slain laid down the silk embroidered glove of challenge by writing a poem about men and why they are lucky to be thier gender.
But quite frankly i disagree, girls have got it better on all counts so below is my responce to her Poem.
You can read hers –>here<–
Oh Woman
How could it be that to some your less than me?
Nothing sounds so foolish or perverse as someone saying women are less than us.
In Nature, that which shows true balance, men serve for only dance or violence.
While we strut and show our plumes, you bear young and build homes.
Oh Woman
Your miraculous bodies; you give us life,
your our mother, our beloved sister, our sacred wife.
With your beauty and your grace you have become humanities face,
TV, Magazines, in our thoughts and our dreams.
Oh Woman
Please forgive us our sins, let us play at lords and kings for without you our lives would be empty things.
I envy you woman and all your mysterious ways and i’ll love you for the rest of my days.
Comments (11)
interesting battle of the sexes.
OH it’s ONNNNNNN lol
Lol
LOL silk embroidered glove of challenge. Nice. Can’t wait to watch this challenge unfold.
I like this!
@ALovingAdversary - It’s got everything genders poems and war
@LKJSlain - Oh yea? bring it wordsworth! hehe
@LilMishas_Ghost - Yeah I could be fun to do this with other themes too.
@gottobereal64 - Thanks
Funny title. She will slay you though.
@BFB1131 - it’s glorious.
@incarnate_emotion - Lol i know it’s sort of like going up to a heavy weight boxer and saying give me your best shot :S
@ALovingAdversary - Hahaha
@BFB1131 - A valiant thought, but I hate the thought of being beaten. Good luck to you sir!
Good piece of writing.