April 25, 2011
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Time and Regret
Bit annoyed at the passage of time at the mo so here’s another attempt at poetry and a little bit of what I’m feeling.
(Also got visitors – my aunt and uncle – so I’ll be even more absent over the next few days, Hawke your pics done I just need to colour it and upload
)Burden:
I have a weight upon me it disturbs my sleep it occupies my mind.
I’ve watched my years drift by, all those days unique but the same…never to be seen again.
Trees have grown, buildings crumbled, my memories blur and jumble.
“But I’m still young!” I hear me say…but that old song has had it’s day, and it’s comfort fades away.Give me freedom another chance…let me reload my mistakes…just once.
But no. Fast or slow time is always on the go, and in our lives, our faces and our regrets it’s passage is etched.
Comments (14)
this is neat. It flows and moves very well.
I loved that line “Let me reload my mistakes…”. If only, so we can rectify them!
It flows wonderfully.
well done!
truth
that poem has nice words and sounds in it.
hope things go well with your aunt and uncle
nice =)
@LKJSlain - Thanks, i was a little unhappy with the first line but the end was pleasing
TY for rec.
@Margo73 - Yeah lol gamer influance i’m afraid, oh for a real world F8 key (my usual quick load button)
@Roadlesstaken - Whooo big props! thanks Alex you as always rule
@ALovingAdversary - :) thankyou, and also for the REC
@buddy71 - :) thanks for reading
@lanney - Yep time is seriously on my mind atm :S
@AmandaBobN - So far it’s been awesome, and the weathers been great
@suuperstar - :D
uh huh
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